Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Maktub: Alchemist Review



  I really enjoyed reading "The Alchemist" by Paulo Coelho. This book is an eye opener and can make someone really unsure about their path THINK! I'm glad I got to read this book. It was an easy read with a lot of things going on. The main character grows throughout the story and becomes a better person. I like the plot because it shows a change that all growing people go through. It shows a lot of struggle and the character overcomes his adversities. I enjoyed seeing the character push through toward his ''Personal Legend".

   One part of the book that I liked was when the character Santiago was robbed and became wiser from that experience. Santiago lost everything he had, the day he was robbed. He had nothing left himself. He felt so low. He was ashamed and cried. He wept because he thought God was unfair and against his dream of going to the pyramids. I really liked seeing Santiago grow from his lose. He thought of where he wanted to be and turned his situation around. The King of Salem made a big impression on the shepherd boy. The King was with Santiago throughout his struggles. While he went through his hard times, Santiago thought of what the king told him. I like that the author shows the king's influence throughout the book. I've had people in my life that have made an impact and I often think of things they've said to keep me going. I can relate to Santiago because I've been through some things and I wanted to give up a few times.

   Paulo did a good job telling the story of Santiago. The book is deep and really gets you thinking about your life and how you chose to live it. We should think of the things Santiago went through and be grateful we didn't have to overcome his issues. These little things I go through are nothing compared to his life. I am so grateful of my own troubles. One thing I did not like about this book was the language was too simple. Theres no figurative language and that may be because the original was in another language. The book was a bit simple.

I would refer this book to a few people I know. My brother should read this. I think he needs a little guidance and should be thinking of his future. This is a great read for young adults struggling with their paths and their daily life choices.


   The shepherd boy
 Young and free  
Eyes set on a treasure he thought he'd never see. 
 He sold his sheep and hit the road 
One day he'd get the gold. 
 He was tricked and robbed, he cried. He sobbed . 
Picked himself up and then took off. 
He made a living in a crystal shop. He had hope and took a shot. 
He grew and over came.
 Giving himself a new name. 
He became a better man while he traveled this foreign land. 
 Santiago so brave and persistent, taught  me a wonderful lesson. 
Follow your heart and just listen.  
It's a start that becomes a mission. 
The world starts to change for you. Working in your favor, for those things made just for you.







1 comment:

  1. Tiff,

    Great work. I'm glad that you were able to get the work done, and I'm glad that you enjoyed the book.

    Your review is very good. It starts off very strong, but notice how your paragraphs thinned out towards the end. Try to keep them all the same length and strength, especially towards the end.

    Great poem! As always - very creative.


    GR: 85 (late)

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