I am writing to tell you I'm thankful for everything you've done for me. I appreciate all you did throughout the years. You are a wonderful mother. I thank God for placing you in my life.
While growing up you showed me every day how to love, work hard and stay strong. I am grateful the times you were hard on me. When I thought I knew it all, you showed me right. When you wanted to say "yes", you protected me and said, "no". You are always supportive in all I do. Thank you for your guidance.
You've been a great friend and I am proud of you. You've taught me how to be a mother. You are such a strong woman. Thank you mum.
Momma, there is no one like you. You taught me things they could never
Teach in school.
Have a heart of gold, you the best in every soul.
You are one in a million. So special
To me. And I hope everything you want, you will one day see.
Happy birthday Momma!
Everyday is your day. Wish I could buy you everything, give you so much money.
You were there for me, when I had no hope. You stood beside me,
when all I felt was alone. You are so caring and I'll never forget. All the love. All the joy, growing up as a kid.
You gave something to me and I'll never let it go, I'll hold on even when I grow old.
Good post!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your poem! Great lines, great rhymes, and an sincerity that is heartfelt. Great work!
Your letter is nice as well, but it is a little short. Try to write about a specific time when your mom helped you out. Give more details. Tell a story. Write more. Expand it!
I like the pictures you chose. Try to add one more, and always put a picture at the top - to draw your readers in.
Good work. Try to make a few adjustments next time to boost your grade.
GR: 90